The essay written in respond to the article, I believe is a passing essay. it has all the requirements that are suppose to be there, except grammar. There are some grammatical errors, some words are misused. At the beginning of the essay the student provides the reader with a summary of the article and relates it to her life. The student relates his or her life to the article by saying that ad's push people to think they always have to have the latest things out. In the body paragraph the student gives examples of why and how ads are brainwashing people. In the conclusion of the paper the student once again gives the articles opinion and she relates it to her idea. She agrees with the whole article and backed it up well. There were some grammatical errors but overall I think the student knew what she was talking about and wrote the paper out well.
Maybe organization could have been better, but overall I think student had strong examples to relate to article, Some words were misused in sentences but I think but these subjects fall under LOC's. Besides that they had everything an essay needs for it to be a good essay,
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